Nossair
Messages : 93 Date d'inscription : 12/09/2011
| Sujet: Le labo à Noss Ven 16 Sep - 21:35 | |
| C'est ici que je posterai mes chansons composées au fur et à mesure que le temps passe. J'écris depuis maintenant 1 an et demi, et j'ai déjà écrit 3 chansons notables, toutes en Anglais: [quote=Broken heart]Since the day you left me I didn’t stop crying There’s no goal to be free Alive I’ve been dying
We were as magnet and steel And now I’m suffering You can’t imagin what I feel My heart’s now just broken
[Refrain] I’m just a broken heart My spirit’s eaten by sharks In my nights you’ve been the light And now my life’s so dark
Our seperation was so brutal I never accepted it You said our love wasn't real But you have to admit
That now
You can love or hate me I don't believe you When you say sadicly "I don't love you... ANYMORE!"
[Refrain][/quote]
La suite plus tard, pour le moment, vos avis sur celle là? | |
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ac42
Messages : 50 Date d'inscription : 21/09/2011 Age : 33 Localisation : Aube (10)
| Sujet: Re: Le labo à Noss Mer 21 Sep - 19:01 | |
| Du peux que j'ai compris, c'est tres bien | |
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Nossair
Messages : 93 Date d'inscription : 12/09/2011
| Sujet: Re: Le labo à Noss Ven 23 Sep - 18:53 | |
| Merci, Ac Alors, une chanson que je viens à peine de finir d'écrire, et que j'aime bien, Stay with me: - Noss, ce matin, a écrit:
- I'll always be beside
Your look is sharper than a knife Look at all what we've been through Your love brings me back to life
Your eyes look like diamonds Your smile's the prettiest one I've ever seen I'd follow you from Spain to Japan In our world I'd be the king and you'd be the queen
[Refrain] *Don't you know I love you And I know you love me too I always make you avoid screams You know, our love is stronger than it seems
You will allways be my princess You're so pretty in your white dress And the prince that you made me be Tells you "Please, don't leave me!" With you I'm feeling so free I'm begging you to... Stay with me*
Ain't no more wonderful girl than you With you sky is always blue But its stars have all gone in your eyes And when I see them my soul flys
And now without you sun's not lightening anymore My feet stay on the floor I'm thinking of you every day And my only remedy is you to stay
*[Refrain]* Et ce qui est incroyable, c'est que cette chanson, pour moi, en tous cas, est formidable, et j'ai formé paroles et mélodie en 30min, en marchant... Allez, si vous êtes sages, je mets les 2 autres demain | |
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ac42
Messages : 50 Date d'inscription : 21/09/2011 Age : 33 Localisation : Aube (10)
| Sujet: Re: Le labo à Noss Ven 23 Sep - 18:58 | |
| Du peux que j'ai compris, c'est tres bien
Oui je sais je me repete | |
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Nossair
Messages : 93 Date d'inscription : 12/09/2011
| Sujet: Re: Le labo à Noss Ven 23 Sep - 19:55 | |
| Si c'est pour me dire ça, répète toi autant que tu veux^^ Bon, une autre de mes chansons: My dream: - Noss, dans un élan d'inspiration, a écrit:
- I lay on my bed
And closed my eyes My fever led- me to forget all the lies
My mind's wide open And I hear a scream The scream that have written My only dream
*[Refrain] I've made a dream, my dream The strangest dream that I have ever seen I've made a dream, my dream I've seen myself as I have never been I've made a dream, my dream You can't imagin the dream that I mean I've made a dream, my dream To enter a brand new world you can lean on my dream.*
I've seen my best friend As a strange creature Sky was green and red And I have read future
Then it's been raining Drop of blood I confess that was scary And I was screaming: "OH MY GOOOOOOD!"
*[Refrain] (I wanna get outta this) Dream My dream The strangest dream that I have ever seen I've made a dream, my dream I've seen myself as I have never been I've made a dream, my dream You can't imagin the dream that I mean I've made a dream, my dream I've been terrified but thanks god it's been just a dream.* Z'en pensez quoi? | |
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asseu2
Messages : 27 Date d'inscription : 21/09/2011
| Sujet: Re: Le labo à Noss Ven 30 Sep - 21:45 | |
| faudrait la musique avec enfin si tu compose. | |
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Nossair
Messages : 93 Date d'inscription : 12/09/2011
| Sujet: Re: Le labo à Noss Sam 1 Oct - 15:38 | |
| Ouaip, je les ai enregistrées, je tacherai de les ré-enregistrer sur piano, voire d'en faire un clip (relativement primitif), avec WMM. | |
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